Sunday, October 7, 2012

Journal #5: In Medias Res


Wolfgang wiped off the sweat from his forehead again, while Jake was still screaming on top of his lungs from the excitement of riding the Anaconda. Wolfgang couldn’t shake off the fear of the consequences for what he was about to do. He had been burying his feelings for two years now but he finally realized that once he committed the crime of loving someone, there couldn’t be anything worse than that. So he practiced his confession for about a month now and decided today is the day. But now the caterpillars in his stomach is starting to bloom out of its shells and whenever he opened his mouth, his heart would just drop upon seeing Jake’s face, so his mouth closes again. Unsure about Jake’s feelings for him, Wolfgang finally managed to puke up those three words, the three words that have the power to change his image. Right that moment, the Anaconda speeded up the hill and all the sudden there, on the seat laid a bracelet and a condom from Jake’s pocket.

1 comment:

  1. Nicely done!
    I really enjoyed the way that you included the details and I can certainly see where this story is going to go. I love that he "puked up the three words".
    Great!
    C; 5/5
    G: 5/5

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