Wolfgang
wiped off the sweat from his forehead again, while Jake was still screaming on
top of his lungs from the excitement of riding the Anaconda. Wolfgang couldn’t
shake off the fear of the consequences for what he was about to do. He had been
burying his feelings for two years now but he finally realized that once he
committed the crime of loving someone, there couldn’t be anything worse than
that. So he practiced his confession for about a month now and decided today is
the day. But now the caterpillars in his stomach is starting to bloom out of
its shells and whenever he opened his mouth, his heart would just drop upon
seeing Jake’s face, so his mouth closes again. Unsure about Jake’s feelings for
him, Wolfgang finally managed to puke up those three words, the three words
that have the power to change his image. Right that moment, the Anaconda speeded
up the hill and all the sudden there, on the seat laid a bracelet and a condom from
Jake’s pocket.
Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed the way that you included the details and I can certainly see where this story is going to go. I love that he "puked up the three words".
Great!
C; 5/5
G: 5/5